Versions of our trailer

This is our first version of our trailer, once we had finished this there were many things we were unhappy about. We felt some scenes were to dark and others to light, we also felt the audio balancing was poor during the car park scenes. Another issue that we didn't correct until our final cut was the lack of an actual title screen.





This is our second edit, we didnt actually film anything extra but alot has changed. The audio has been re balanced, scenes that were previously to dark have been brightened and alot of the daytime shots have been given a nightime overlay as we believe this would suit the norms of prostitution better.
However we still wasnt pleased with the car scenes! We felt they slowed the pace of the trailer yet were essential to the narrative to demonstrate the awkwardness of the relationship at first and how these two people came to meet. We were also still unhappy with the lack of end titles.